TOEFL Essay Örnekleri

TOEFL essay örnekleri sayfası TOEFL IBT Writing bölümüyle ilgili örnek yazıları  içerir.

TOEFL Writing iki bölümden oluşur.

Entegre Yazma (Integrated Writing): İlk önce bir ders dinlenir, sonra o dersle ilgili bir yazı okunur. Daha sonra 20 dakika içerisinde dinlenen ve okunan metni sentezleyerek 250 kelimelik bir özet ya da karşılaştırma yazısı hazırlanır.

Serbest Yazma (Independent Writing): 30 dakika içerisinde 4-5 paragraflık, 300-350 kelime arası bir kompozisyon yazılması beklenir.

TOEFL serbest yazma bölümünde yani Task 2 kısmında iyi bir puan almak için yazdığınız kompozisyonun şu özelliklere sahip olması gerekir:

  • Doğru dilbilgisi kullanımı
  • Doğru kelime seçimleri
  • Cümleler ve paragraflar arası mantıklı geçişler
  • Tutarlı ve bütünsel bir metin

Yazı yazmak pratikle gelişen bir beceridir. O sebeple, bol bol örnek yazı okuyup siz de her gün bir essay yazmaya çalışın. Yazdığınız essayleri bilgili birine okutup hatalarınızı düzelttirin.

TOEFL Essay Örnekleri

TOEFL Task 1 – Integrated Writing Essay Örnekleri

İlk olarak ETS yani TOEFL’ı hazırlayan kurum tarafından yayınlanmış bir yazı örneğine bakalım.

Essay Prompt: Summarize the points made in the lecture you just heard, explaining how they cast doubt on points made in the reading.

Essay:

The lecturer talks about research conducted by a firm that used the group system to handle their work. He says that the theory stated in the passage was very different and somewhat inaccurate when compared to what happened for real.

First, some members got free rides. That is, some didn’t work hard but got recognition for the success nonetheless. This also indicates that people who worked hard was not given recognition they should have got. In other words, they weren’t given the opportunity to “shine”. This directly contradicts what the passage indicates.

Second, groups were slow in progress. The passage says that groups are more responsive than individuals because of the number of people involved and their aggregated resources. However, the speaker talks about how the firm found out that groups were slower than individuals in decision making. Groups needed more time for meetings, which are necessary procedures in decision making. This was another part where experience contradicted theory.

Third, influential people might emerge, and lead the group towards glory or failure. If the influential people are going in the right direction there would be no problem. But in cases where they go in the wrong direction, there is nobody that has enough influence to counter the decision made. In other words, the group might turn into a dictatorship, with the influential party as the leader, and might be less flexible in thinking. They might become one-sided, and thus fail to succeed.

And lastly, paragraph says that everyone feels responsible for their own part, and all together they are all more effective as a team. In the lecture, doubt was expressed concerning the advantages of the recent trend of forming teams to tackle projects, which was mentioned in the reading.

 

TOEFL Task 2 – Independent Writing Essay Örnekleri

Prompt: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Essay:

The traditional virtue of telling the truth in all situations is increasingly doubted by many in today’s world. Many believe that telling the truth is not always the best policy when dealing with people. Moreover, the line of a “truth” is becoming more and more vague. This essay will explore the importance of telling the truth in relationships between people.

We all understand that often the truth is offending and may not be a very nice thing to both hear and say. Lies or white lies often have their advantages. The manipulation of white lies is the most obvious the business world. How many times have we heard that some product is “the finest” or “the cheapest”? How many times have we heard that products have such and such “magical functions”? Advertising is about persuasion, and many would agree that if a company is to tell the absolute truth about its products, no one would be interested in even having a look at the products.

The same logic applies to human relationships. if your friend had worn a newly purchased dress on her birthday and energetically asked you if it was a worthy buy, would you freely express your opinion that you had never seen a dress as the one she’s currently wearing? And spoil her birthday? Unarguably, hiding (entirely or partially) the truth in some situations can be quite handy indeed. Confrontations and disputes can seemingly be avoided.

However, there is always the risk factor of the truth emerging sooner or later when telling an untruth. The basic trust in any relationships (businessman/customer, friends, and parents/children) will be blotched, and would have an impact on the future relationship between both parties. The story of the “the boy who cried wolf” fully illustrates the consequences of telling untruths. No one will believe you when you’re telling the truth. Your word will have no weighting.

In addition, another “bad factor” of telling untruths is that you have absolutely no control over when the truth (of previous untruths) will emerge. Untruths breed pain in both parties: tears when the truth is uncovered after a period of time; fear and the burden of sharing a “secret”. In the long run, it seems that hiding the truth is not beneficial to either party.

Everyone hates betrayal. even if it is the trend to occasionally hide the truth in relationships, it is strongly recommended that not to follow that trend as the risk and the consequences of the truth unfolded overwhelms the minimal advantages one can derive from not telling the truth. After all, it is understood that relationships are founded on “trust” which goes hand in hand with “truth”. Indeed telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people. Always.

TOEFL Writing Essay Örnekleri Listesi (Integrated Writing)

Kaynaklar

  1. ETS TOEFL IBT Writing Sample Responses
  2. Testmagic TOEFL Sample Essays
  3. GoodLuckTOEFL Sample Essays

 

Etiketler: toefl essay örnekleri, toefl ibt essay örnekleri, toefl integrated writing örneği, toefl independent writing örneği, toefl writing ipuçları,

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